Writing is re-writing

May 2nd, 2018

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Good afternoon all!

Some of you may have heard this phrase before: writing is re-writing. A lot of the time, we look at the finished book in our hands and don’t realize the amount of drafts it took to get to the final copy. As a reader, I certainly didn’t know much about the process of writing a book.

When I first began writing more seriously in 2012, I was a newbie and didn’t know much about drafting and revising. I finished my first complete novel during NanoWrimo that fall and then in January took a look at the manuscript. It was awful. There were plot holes and two dimensional characters and hardly any description. The bits I did like I saved and then decided a re-write was in order. That was when I began researching how to re-write and revise.

Marissa Meyer has a great series about how she brings her story idea to a complete novel. She outlines what she does in each stage from brainstorming, research, first, second, third drafts, etc. I found that to be quite helpful when tackling my own first re-write.

https://www.marissameyer.com/blogtype/from-idea-to-finished-step-3-the-first-draft/

Presently: the continual learning curve 

I received feedback on my current fantasy WIP, THE LOST SAGES (formally titled EVREN) and am working on it now. There was so much helpful feedback that I’ve created a TO DO list and am tackling each one separately. Even though it feels like I have to climb a mountain, I know in my heart of hearts that I will be so proud of this book when I’m done.

The thing I am realizing too is, this book is one of the first projects I’ve taken on and I am learning SO much. I am receiving insight into myself as a writer and where my strengths and weaknesses lie. I am learning a lot about grammar and proper punctuation and the age old, show don’t tell rule as well as the infamous info dumping in fantasy novels 🙂 It is all good and encouraging. I know this is the path I need to take to grow as a writer. I want to feel confident in my ability to pen a story and have the proper tools in my toolbox, as Stephen King explains craft.

I am at the point in my writing career where I can sense a few things coming down the road. I want to write stories I am proud of and that have heart in them. I want people to to resonate with them and perhaps see themselves in the characters. I also want to write the best story possible. I don’t want to settle.

This week I have been thinking a lot about creativity and projects we take on. Sometimes if we take on too much, our writing suffers because of it. I’ve noticed that I haven’t been able to focus as much and find it hard to return and work on THE LOST SAGES. I sat down and wrote in my journal, trying to discern what was keeping me distracted. Too many projects on the go. I needed to narrow my focus and so I have. Now, I set myself a reachable goal for each week and hope to have this latest draft done by June.

What are you all working on? How many drafts do you write? I would love to hear below.

Until next time,

Loie xo

Spring showers and fairy tales

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April 26th, 2018 – 12:35 pm

Hi dear friends!

Today has been an overcast day with a steady stream of rain. My porch plants are getting their fair share of a drink. Hopefully not too much 😉

Fairy Tales 

Popping in with a quick little post. This week has been full of lovely surprises. I received word that a fairy tale flash fiction I submitted for publication has been accepted by Enchanted Conversation Magazine for June’s issue. I will post the link when it goes live. This will be my first creative writing publication and I am super thrilled. I also sent out a proposal for an article about the importance of the library in our digital world and it was accepted. *inhales deeply* This writing gig is working out and I am grateful.

#RevPit 

There is a contest going on right now called #RevPit. A couple of days ago, the window opened to submit one’s manuscript’s first five pages and query letter to two potential editors. If you get chosen, one editor will work with you over the next five weeks to go through your book and strengthen it for querying. It has been a lot of fun stalking *coughs* I mean, watching the twitter feed to see if the editors I submitted to have posted any snippets or hints at what submission they are currently reading.

Writing Plans 

I received an editor’s feedback (different from #RevPit) on EVREN a week ago. I’ve been mulling over some of the suggestions or questions that came up while she read the manuscript. She sent me twenty pages of detailed notes, for which I am so grateful for. Currently creating detailed index cards for every scene in my book and deciding which to keep, edit, re-write, or trash. I believe this will bring EVREN to a stronger place than ever. Also, she suggested changing the title 😀 I agree with her suggestion and will be now calling my YA sea-faring fantasy THE LOST SAGES.

How are you all making out? What are you currently working on? Please let me know in the comments ❤

Until next time,

Loie xo